I really loved to play this little game ! Congratulations for your work and I look forward another masterpieces ❤️❤️❤️ Takuya is lovely instead of being unstable 😔
The writing, the pace, the yandere himself, the everything! I like a story that's more choice heavy, but this?! There were a few choices to make, but I was so invested in the story itself it didn't even matter! This was so frickin' GOODT. I loved this!! Amazing job, dev! Standing ovation!
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The character flip was 100/10 not only my favorite part. but the BEST part. Seeing him go from loving "boyfriend" to yandere to full on unstable psycho?! "You're looking at me like..." and here I am full on expecting him to say like he's crazy, psycho, a killer, or something along those lines, but instead his face contorts more and more and then he hits me with "Like you're SOBER"?! AHHH THE CHEF'S KISS THAT WAS THAT PART. I kinda figured we were being drugged but him just outright ADMITTING it?! Yoooooo!! I loved that! I love, love, love, love, LOVE this visual novel! The dev did such an amazing job!
This game was so good! I played it both in French & English & they both gave me strong emotions about Takuya. I hope that you create more games like this!
I don't know if it's my yandere syndrome, but I felt sorry for Takuya... I wanted him to have a happy ending with us, where we knew the truth and chose to give him a chance.
But I loved the game, since the beginning you can pick up the signs, but he fakes so well!
Honesty not what I was expecting. I thought I was downloading a cute dating sim-type game. Quickly realized I had signed up for something entirely different. But nevertheless, an amazing game, and I absolutely loved the twist on a seemingly wholesome game.
Oh wow this was so much fun to play! This is one of the few games that actually surprised and scared me! I'll put a video of my playthrough here when it's done. While I was editing the video and watching it back, I can see all the suspicious things going on! This is written so well! Watching it from the beginning once you know what's happening is even MORE scary! Plus the true ending is one of the best I've played, thank you for that! I think this game is the perfect length, not too short or long! I hope you enjoy my playthrough!
"My body stiffens: i didnt lock the door" AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH
this novel really scared me and i love much of a genuine spycho Takuya is. I also liked how he'd cut of when were talking, adds more dynamic and pression to the story. The music didnt help at all by making my heart race, it was so well made!
(´ ∀ ` *) Ah, the wonders of having a gentle yandere househusband to care and feed you (fictionally). It's already a red flag when no electronics are used in your everyday life (and that hole in your bathroom that reeks of rotting flesh・人・). In my opinion, the true ending is the best ending. MC was free and happy for good. Nonetheless, I enjoyed the game! ( ´ ω ` )
The moment he mentioned the "no gadgets stuffs" I knew it would turn out to be like this XD I like it *shy* The true ending makes my heart ache a bit :'< although he killed Seji, poor him. But QAQ
Did not go into this game expecting the mood that happened but ho boy did I promptly start going WAIT A MINUTE. Great job, honestly! Even for a short piece, I dug it!
That was creepy- but nevertheless I loved how it goes! Managed to get both ending (and the CG scenes are pretty good I have to say).
I'm a bit sad for Seiji though.. that was tragic no matter how he was with her (considering that we don't know how he treated her; still... what takuya did to him ;;). I'm also sooo glad for the true ending! The neighbourhood was really helpful in order to maintain her safety. But it's true that even if the person who causes trauma on you has been captured, the trauma lives on inside your mind. It will always be there even if you might seem like you have overcome it. I like the how realistic it is. *thumbs up*
Honestly, this is great! The writing, the music, the art, everything is amazing! I tried every choice, I got both endings, and it really intrigued me. It gives me the chills, I am on edge with the dialogue, the music, the facial expressions, all of it just adds to the creepiness and makes me uneasy the entire time. Even with the "true" ending, I still feel unsettled. For a short yandere game, this is really good.
I like the concept of this game a lot! The writing is good aswell, I think if you expand upon it it would really shine :) (I adored the "best cook" red herring on the apron)
Thank you ! @Kid Bowyer helped me for the translation in English (because I first wrote it in French) but I think I can take this compliment for me x3 And yes, I'm really proud of this "Best Cook" joke xD
i love the creepy expression of Takuya, the suspense, the CGs, and the true ending thats not like other game's "true" ending. because life is not always ends with "rainbows". and some truths hurts. thank you for making this game. absolutely love it!
LOOOOL Look, I've never left a comment before I've finished all the routes of a VN, but this is just great XD I like the way the game progresses, it's perfect for a simple game like this. Simple progression of the plot that just gets to the point, revealing just the things we need to know for the game to have the right impact. Perfect, really!! Anyway, I just came here to say, that after I got my first ending, Canibal Love: Bad ending, I internally shrieked "There's a GOOD ending in this?!?!" Hahaha, I guess it's time to find out if that was just a way to get my hopes up, before CRUSHING them XDXD
Your game's simple, short and (sickeningly ;)) sweet, but right to the point. It does just what it's meant to. Thanks for letting me play it, Creator!!!
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Just finished. I'm glad to know why some endings are called "True" Endings, rather than good ones. A surpruisingly solemn finish to a game that housed such an edgy trope. I like that. It was a serious ending to something that would have left a serious scar.
Thank you ! I really appreciate your comment (that's the kind of reaction I love to read about this game). You've understood its purpose very well and that makes me happy. So, thank you very much ! <3
I love this game so much. I really love games that look sweet but turn out twisted and dark so this was right up my ally. Quick question though is how many endings are there? I've gotten two no matter what I choose so i was just wondering. Great game and I enjoyed playing it!
Thank you for your previous comment and yeeeeees any help would be great! It's so kind of you ^^ If you want you can contact me on Twitter (@WaterHorseGames) or by mail zena.makes.videogames@gmail.com
I saw ManlyBadassHero play this and honestly I wanna say my own thoughts but first of all Takuyas character is really interesting and I love it and secondly the art could be a little better but it isn’t bad it’s still on the good side uwu
I really enjoyed this game, and I've worked as an Editor/Translation Check on a handful of visual novels, would you to be willing to let me proofread/edit your English version?
It would be for free, of course, I just want to help make the game as good as possible. :D
Sorry for the slow reply - I fell very ill for a while.
I can either play through the game and make a .txt of edits/corrections manually, or if you could export the narration/dialog into a file, I could work on that via Google Docs. Do you know what might work best?
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I really loved to play this little game ! Congratulations for your work and I look forward another masterpieces ❤️❤️❤️ Takuya is lovely instead of being unstable 😔
THIS WAS SO GOOD~!! <3
The writing, the pace, the yandere himself, the everything! I like a story that's more choice heavy, but this?! There were a few choices to make, but I was so invested in the story itself it didn't even matter! This was so frickin' GOODT. I loved this!! Amazing job, dev! Standing ovation!
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The character flip was 100/10 not only my favorite part. but the BEST part. Seeing him go from loving "boyfriend" to yandere to full on unstable psycho?! "You're looking at me like..." and here I am full on expecting him to say like he's crazy, psycho, a killer, or something along those lines, but instead his face contorts more and more and then he hits me with "Like you're SOBER"?! AHHH THE CHEF'S KISS THAT WAS THAT PART. I kinda figured we were being drugged but him just outright ADMITTING it?! Yoooooo!! I loved that! I love, love, love, love, LOVE this visual novel! The dev did such an amazing job!
This game was so good! I played it both in French & English & they both gave me strong emotions about Takuya. I hope that you create more games like this!
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I don't know if it's my yandere syndrome, but I felt sorry for Takuya... I wanted him to have a happy ending with us, where we knew the truth and chose to give him a chance.
But I loved the game, since the beginning you can pick up the signs, but he fakes so well!
Am I weird for wanting a "romantic" ending with Takuya? hahaha i loved the game. I had a lot of fun ❤
Loved it!
Where can I find the credits for and the name of the music played in the game?
At first I got the bad ending and it was very distressing.
não dava nada pro jogo, me surpreendeu e realmente me deu um medo psicologico
oh wow, I got the true ending first try. I love this game.
true ending yayyy! This game is really good, interesting plot twist
Honesty not what I was expecting. I thought I was downloading a cute dating sim-type game. Quickly realized I had signed up for something entirely different. But nevertheless, an amazing game, and I absolutely loved the twist on a seemingly wholesome game.
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Oh wow this was so much fun to play! This is one of the few games that actually surprised and scared me! I'll put a video of my playthrough here when it's done. While I was editing the video and watching it back, I can see all the suspicious things going on! This is written so well! Watching it from the beginning once you know what's happening is even MORE scary! Plus the true ending is one of the best I've played, thank you for that! I think this game is the perfect length, not too short or long! I hope you enjoy my playthrough!
Loved this game, I really would have loved more scenes and for it to be longer! Hope we get more like this <
The 'True Ending' is one of the most satisfying endings I've ever gotten in one of these types of games.
What was the true ending? I could never get it ;-;
basically you get out the house and escape and the guy probably went to jail
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"My body stiffens: i didnt lock the door" AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH
this novel really scared me and i love much of a genuine spycho Takuya is. I also liked how he'd cut of when were talking, adds more dynamic and pression to the story. The music didnt help at all by making my heart race, it was so well made!
(´ ∀ ` *) Ah, the wonders of having a gentle yandere househusband to care and feed you (fictionally). It's already a red flag when no electronics are used in your everyday life (and that hole in your bathroom that reeks of rotting flesh・人・). In my opinion, the true ending is the best ending. MC was free and happy for good. Nonetheless, I enjoyed the game! ( ´ ω ` )
A nice short and creepy story. It was well written too. :D
he didn't call me 'my darling' once -_-
i mean... i'd stay with him
The moment he mentioned the "no gadgets stuffs" I knew it would turn out to be like this XD I like it *shy* The true ending makes my heart ache a bit :'< although he killed Seji, poor him. But QAQ
Precisely what I was looking for! I had an excellent evening as advertised, 10/10.
Bruh I finally got the true ending but his conclusion to the situation was insane.
Did not go into this game expecting the mood that happened but ho boy did I promptly start going WAIT A MINUTE. Great job, honestly! Even for a short piece, I dug it!
Does this game have multiple endings?
Yes, two :)
Thank you for answering, I played and got both. I really liked the game :)
That was creepy- but nevertheless I loved how it goes! Managed to get both ending (and the CG scenes are pretty good I have to say).
I'm a bit sad for Seiji though.. that was tragic no matter how he was with her (considering that we don't know how he treated her; still... what takuya did to him ;;). I'm also sooo glad for the true ending! The neighbourhood was really helpful in order to maintain her safety. But it's true that even if the person who causes trauma on you has been captured, the trauma lives on inside your mind. It will always be there even if you might seem like you have overcome it. I like the how realistic it is. *thumbs up*
Honestly, this is great! The writing, the music, the art, everything is amazing! I tried every choice, I got both endings, and it really intrigued me. It gives me the chills, I am on edge with the dialogue, the music, the facial expressions, all of it just adds to the creepiness and makes me uneasy the entire time. Even with the "true" ending, I still feel unsettled. For a short yandere game, this is really good.
Thank you so much!
I like the concept of this game a lot! The writing is good aswell, I think if you expand upon it it would really shine :)
(I adored the "best cook" red herring on the apron)
Thank you ! @Kid Bowyer helped me for the translation in English (because I first wrote it in French) but I think I can take this compliment for me x3 And yes, I'm really proud of this "Best Cook" joke xD
This was scary, I hated it, not what I expected...MURDER ME NOW!!!!
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i love the creepy expression of Takuya, the suspense, the CGs, and the true ending thats not like other game's "true" ending. because life is not always ends with "rainbows". and some truths hurts. thank you for making this game. absolutely love it!
Thank you for playing ;)
LOOOOL Look, I've never left a comment before I've finished all the routes of a VN, but this is just great XD I like the way the game progresses, it's perfect for a simple game like this. Simple progression of the plot that just gets to the point, revealing just the things we need to know for the game to have the right impact. Perfect, really!! Anyway, I just came here to say, that after I got my first ending, Canibal Love: Bad ending, I internally shrieked "There's a GOOD ending in this?!?!" Hahaha, I guess it's time to find out if that was just a way to get my hopes up, before CRUSHING them XDXD
Your game's simple, short and (sickeningly ;)) sweet, but right to the point. It does just what it's meant to. Thanks for letting me play it, Creator!!!
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Just finished. I'm glad to know why some endings are called "True" Endings, rather than good ones. A surpruisingly solemn finish to a game that housed such an edgy trope. I like that. It was a serious ending to something that would have left a serious scar.
Thank you ! I really appreciate your comment (that's the kind of reaction I love to read about this game). You've understood its purpose very well and that makes me happy. So, thank you very much ! <3
I love this game so much. I really love games that look sweet but turn out twisted and dark so this was right up my ally. Quick question though is how many endings are there? I've gotten two no matter what I choose so i was just wondering. Great game and I enjoyed playing it!
Hi! First thank you for your comment :) There are 2 endings so you've surely got all of them
...This is so sick. I love it.
oh yeah, question. Is there by any chance you would want somebody to draw some scenes for the game?
Thank you for your previous comment and yeeeeees any help would be great! It's so kind of you ^^ If you want you can contact me on Twitter (@WaterHorseGames) or by mail zena.makes.videogames@gmail.com
aaa sorry for the late reply, there was family over ^^ I followed you through my twitter account which is
alsoGrapedGrayI saw, perfect!
I saw ManlyBadassHero play this and honestly I wanna say my own thoughts but first of all Takuyas character is really interesting and I love it and secondly the art could be a little better but it isn’t bad it’s still on the good side uwu
I wanted to ask something.
I really enjoyed this game, and I've worked as an Editor/Translation Check on a handful of visual novels, would you to be willing to let me proofread/edit your English version?
It would be for free, of course, I just want to help make the game as good as possible. :D
Thank you ! It would be great to have some help with translation. How do you proceed ?
Sorry for the slow reply - I fell very ill for a while.
I can either play through the game and make a .txt of edits/corrections manually, or if you could export the narration/dialog into a file, I could work on that via Google Docs. Do you know what might work best?
No problem ^^
Both are good. Can I have your email or other to contact you ?
kiddmaniac@gmail.com
Thank you !
A lot more than what I came for. Totally charming. 10/10
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